Info Tournament Fights

Discussion in 'One Piece Role Play' started by Larsi, Mar 25, 2018.

Share This Page

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Capt_NakedPanda
    Well described, and good personality. Interesting ending.



    @Captain Bullshit
    Your format disguises how short your posts are, but at the same time it really ruins the fluidity of your posts. You need to describe your moves better. For example your first post, which direction did you pirouette away from him? When you counter attack, was it a swing or a thrust? This got better as the fight progressed though, as did the length, but the fluidity is still not good. The ending was interesting.



    Also, bring it both of you :vonFlame:
     
  2. Tiago

    Tiago

    Messages:
    4,897
    Likes Received:
    13,688
    Trophy Points:
    20,210
    Bounty Points:
    42,400
  3. Ziosa

    Ziosa Rest in peace OJ Roger Big Mom Cracker Katakuri Smoothie

    Messages:
    14,285
    Likes Received:
    254,905
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    63,350
  4. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Chris Mic
    Very!
    Generally well described and good personality, but you didnt describe your first blow up punch properly, and you popping up after passing out in the end was a bit weird.



    @Charlotte Pepper
    Well described and good personzlity. Only nitpicking is the fact that you cant use tooth gum since youre not a shark.
     
  5. Smileyman

    Smileyman

    Messages:
    3,812
    Likes Received:
    11,996
    Trophy Points:
    18,830
    Bounty Points:
    1,480
    Battleground #43
    Contestant 1: @Sir
    Contestant 2: @Smileyman
    Contestant 3: @Sallucion


    Winner: None, game never finished or really started.

    First Post:
    Last post:
     
  6. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
  7. Problematic

    Problematic

    Messages:
    535
    Likes Received:
    3,301
    Trophy Points:
    6,310
    Bounty Points:
    49,750
  8. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Tiago
    Generally well described and decent personality, but a few nitpicks:
    A few of your attacks was lacking in description. How does a blind man "spot" his opponent? Whats "shield of chi"?




    @Yaksha
    Well described and decent personality too. You also however had a few attacks that lacked in terms of description, but you also once again repeatedly were late with your posts
     
  9. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Yaksha
    Like with your other fight, you generally described well and had good personality. A few of your attacks could be described better, and you also repeatedly forgot to post.



    Also well described and good personality, but you too had a few attacks that could have been described better
     
  10. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Smileyman
    Well described and decent personality. Only nitpick is how do you feel your opponent? That's not a thing unless you have haki. You used the area well though.

    @Sir
    Well described, but incredible passive. Not to mention the fact that you didn't finish.

    @Sallucion
    The little you posted was well described.
     
    Smileyman, Roogy, Fanboy sins and 4 others like this.
  11. Larsi

    Larsi

    Messages:
    22,951
    Likes Received:
    142,606
    Trophy Points:
    32,030
    Bounty Points:
    178,040
    @Problematic
    Well described and good personality. Nothing to critique really, other that I'm surprised you didn't shred the inside of his mouth with the blades.


    @RMP321
    Well described and good personality. You abandoned the fight though.
     
    Problematic, Smileyman, Roogy and 4 others like this.
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice