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    @Bounty
    Well described and funny in the start. Not anything notable to critique.


    @Capt_NakedPanda
    Generally well described, but a shigan doesn't make big holes in things. It just makes small holes a little wider than your finger.
     
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    @Madara
    You generally described your actions well, and the false reasoning for the fight was interesting. However you need to describe your character performing the special attacks, and there were several times where you controlled your opponents reaction.



    @Major Lee Hung
    Generally well described, though I felt ir was lacking compared to your other fights. Your first kick can also be seen as an autohit.
     
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    @Portgas D. Xatch
    Your narration and action descriptions were a bit short, at least early in the fight. Mimicing the hangover was very funny. Interesting use of Kami-E



    @Otis
    Well described and good personality. Good length as well.
     
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    @NeoRetro
    You described well, but I feel you could have easily avoided his gunshot. Maybe focus a bit more on your actions rather than your speech? Also, your character sounds like a revo, not a pirate.



    @Otis
    Well described and your personality came through well. I feel like you too though could have easily avoided at least one of those attacks.
     
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    @Mirror D. Roogy
    Your descriptions left a little to be desired at times. Mostly good though.




    @NeoRetro
    You need to describe your moves better, you have a lot of personality in your posts, but your actions are overly simple often.
     
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    @Finalbeta
    You really need to describe your moves better. How did you sneak up on him? What is your strongest attack, and where on him did you aim it? How do you block the attacks? H There's also no personality. Is your character mute?



    @Frayzah
    You didn't defend against his first attack? You describe your other defensive moves a lot better than your attacks too. Personality is a bit lacking too.
     
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    @Yaksha
    Well first of all you repeatedly took too long to respond, which is why this fight wasn't finished. Your actions lack a bit of description early on, but you improved aftewards, then seemed to drop in quality near the end again. Grabbing her wrist is an autohit and controlling your opponent. You can attempt to grab and say what would happen if you were successful, but it's up to your opponent to decide whether or not you are successful. You used a lot of rokushiki moves, careful, you have the lowest tier of stamina.


    @Arcana
    Well described and good personality. Not anything notable to comment on other than maybe this seems like autohitting: "Luckily there was a middle weight stone beside her. She grabbed it and threw it on Landing Peclo's Chest."
     
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    @Anriokso
    How did you find him in the tree? Air projectiles are special abilities so using those you need to also post the description of the technique, so that we know how strong the techniqiue is, etc. "I quickly close the distance between us and attempt to attack him directly." What kind of attack? Against which body part?

    Also, try separating your posts into sentences, they're quite long.



    @Beerbottle
    Generally well described, and had good personality. You didn't describe your character actually performing this attack though: "Ittoryu Iai: Shishi Sonson".
     
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    @Rorouni Zoro
    You described well with the little you were given a chance to. Not anything notable to criticize.


    @Rohan
    Well, your posts were rather simplistic, and you didnt post your stats. Fight was also cut short by you leaving.
     
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    @StrawHatter
    Generally well described, though your use of impact dial was lacking a bit. How does your character know another characters stats? Im also confused about exactly what happened in your attempt to dodge his first Sanjuroku Pound Ho as it wasnt very clear. You also only have access to 2 dials before 21 mastery, so you wouldnt be able to use the flame dial.



    @Suterusu
    Well described and good personality, though when using special attacks you relied too much on the copy paste description instead of fully describing your character using the attack, which should at leaat be done the first time you use it in each fight.
     
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    @Ziosa
    Well described and good personality. Nothing to criticize other than maybe a few short posts.


    @Anriokso
    Please split your posts into sentences. Makes it much nicer to read. Your descriptions were quite simplistic though and airslashes and other special techniques need their full technique description included.
     
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    @Problematic
    Well described and RPed and good personality. Nothing to criticize as far as i can tell.


    @Portgas D. Xatch
    The opening sequence was funny and interesting. You had a lot of personality and described well. The flashing was a bit tasteless though.

    But rip Hawksy (2018-2018)
     
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    @Kagura
    A lot of personality and good descriptions, but there wasnt really a fight as you let him kill himself. I dont really know what to say, lol.



    @Loony
    Good personality, emotional and good description. Im a bit at a loss though due to the ending. Top 10 anime sacrifices. :feelscryingman:
     
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    @Rorouni Zoro
    Well described and RPed. Only minor complaint is that the water isnt deep enough to submerge you unless youre laying flat on your back.



    @Sallucion
    Well RPed and described too, but there were multiple delays even without the forfit.
     
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