@Finalbeta Still a bit simplistic, but you are improving your descriptions. For special attacks you need to include the full description of your special technique in a spoiler tag like this: Spoiler -Sanjuroku Pound Ho (三十六煩悩（ポンド）鳳 Sanjūroku Pondo Hō?, kanji meaning "Phoenix of the 36 Earthly Desires"; furigana meaning "Pound Phoenix/Cannon"): This attack uses the air itself to slash the target from a distance. To initiate it, the user first holds one of his swords horizontally above the shoulder of his sword arm, and then performs a circular swing that launches the air compressed projectile spiraling towards the target. (21 Mastery, 21 Strength and 21 Movement Speed) Destructive Potency Rank: C You should also describe your general attacks a bit more indepth as well. @Fanboy sins New format is much more fluid. You described well and it was funny at times. Nothing to complain about really, other than you could have had more of the good stuff, and maybe a bit more personality.