Poetry Interference and the Momentarily

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  1. Eileen Winifred Sanchez

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    This happy ending
    bring me up to the surface
    I need room to breathe
    room to sleep in a cozy bed
    I am starved of life
    the knife quickens its pace towards my neck
    breaking boundaries and slow motion
    the world is spinning and I am motionless among it all
    I am hopeless without a guide to sway me along
    all along I was someone else and not someone different
    fading voices as hands reach for me
    complete me, as the paths cross
    and the tide has its next victim, me
    its next paycheck
    its next naked breath
    the cold is creeping in

    @Nico Robin
    @Mirror D. Roogy
    @Sanji_
     
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    Damn....I was actually feeling claustrophobic reading that. One thing I hate is not enough space
     
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    It all plays on our fears and I find that relatable when I write.
    Connecting the dots with someone when being a poet, is a most essential thing indeed.
     
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    Beautifully written.. The power of those few selected symbolism truly relates to each reader.. And it only depends on its area of comprehension.. Thanks for the tag although it didn't appear on my feeds..

    I couldn't agree more..

    I haven't written anything these past few weeks due to RPG..
     
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    Thanks for the feedback everyone. Look forward to more!
    Haven't written for awhile so yeah. Gotta go at it hard!

    Might do a theme I am unfamiliar with next time then.
     
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    Ur welcome.. Looking forward to read it..
     
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