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  1. IceTimeXI

    IceTimeXI

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  2. Enryu

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  3. Ziosa

    Ziosa Rest in peace OJ Wanted Roger Big Mom Cracker Katakuri Smoothie

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  4. Prison Mike

    Prison Mike

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    @Handsome (RP-ing as Alvida)

    Personality-18
    Story Progression-16
    Combat Prowess-17
    Description-18
    Enjoyable-18

    Pros: Great personality, great descriptions, great story. Enjoyable to read. Great use of powers, and the action was quite entertaining. Posts were structured in a way that kept me interested and made it quite easy for me to tell what was going on.

    Cons: Personality was great, but could’ve been used a bit more in certain places.

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    No points deducted for rule breaks.

    18+16+17+18+18=87
    87x4=348
    348x7=2,436 EXP Awarded

    Note: I did not review Handsome’s post after Tartan and Romin showed up. I can’t review Tartan and Romin since they are in my squad, and I didn't want to review his fight beyond that point knowing that he was RP-ing against my own team @Ruffles @Ziosa

    @IceTimeXI

    Personality-15
    Story Progression-15
    Combat Prowess-15
    Description-10
    Enjoyable-13

    Pros: Good Personality. The raps were a nice touch. Your posts were concise and to the point. No unnecessary fluff that caused me to become disinterested. You were fairly creative in the way that you attempted to apprehend Alvida.

    Cons:

    1. Vague descriptions. At times I wasn’t quite sure what was going on. While your posts were very concise, at times I felt like they were too lacking in descriptions overall.

    2. Your posts also not structured in an ideal way. There needs to be a clear distinction between action, dialogue, and thoughts.

    These two problems made your posts suffer in almost every category. Correcting these will go a long way in making your posts more enjoyable.

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    In the future, remember to request and NPC host on the necessary thread.

    No points deducted for rule breaks.

    15+15+15+10+13=68
    68x4=272
    272x12=3,264
    +50% canon bonus=4,896 EXP awarded
     
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  5. Ziosa

    Ziosa Rest in peace OJ Wanted Roger Big Mom Cracker Katakuri Smoothie

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    @Kagura
    Personality- 15/25
    Your characters personality was lacking a bit I feel but the stuff you had was pretty good

    Story progression- 13/25
    The start of the fight was rushed in a few posts and we didn't have much context on how your characters knew each other, why you were fighting etc.

    Combat prowess- 18/25
    Pretty good overall, could've done with a bit more variety in attacks as alot of them were fairy similar but its just a nitpick

    Descriptions- 16/25
    Good overall, could've done with a bit more detail in some posts however

    Enjoyable- 18/25
    It was a pretty fun read

    Didn't post stats- reduction of 2 points
    Just putting link to bio doesnt count as you can easily edit stats in the bio mid fight, needs to have at least the stats in your first post so people know what they are at the start

    78x4= 312
    312x13= 4,056 Total Exp awarded

    @Ruffles
    Personality- 15/25
    Your characters personality wasn't bad but it felt lacking

    Story progression- 13/25
    The start of the fight was rushed in a few posts and we didn't have much context on how your characters knew each other, why you were fighting etc.

    Combat prowess- 17/25
    Pretty good overall

    Descriptions- 14/25
    Could've been better, sometimes hard to tell whats a thought and whats a speech; attacks could also be done better with more description

    Enjoyable- 18/25
    It was a pretty fun read

    Didn't post stats- reduction of 2 points
    Just putting link to bio doesnt count as you can easily edit stats in the bio mid fight, needs to have at least the stats in your first post so people know what they are at the start

    75x4= 300
    300x13= 3,900 Total Exp awarded
     
  6. Enryu

    Enryu

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    @Fanboy sins
    Personality-20/25

    Story Progression-18/25

    Combat Prowess-14/25

    Description-17/25

    Enjoyable-18/25

    Total Score: 87x4=348

    348x7 =2436 Total Exp Awarded

    @Cpt.
    Personality-19/25

    Story Progression-18/25

    Combat Prowess-14/25

    Description-17/25

    Enjoyable-18/25

    Total Score: 86x4=344


    344x8 =2752 Total Exp Awarded

    I lost my sheet with the small comments I had in this fight so I'm just going to give out the points and skip the comments...mb :catsalute:
     
  7. Larsi

    Larsi

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  8. Cpt.

    Cpt. Insterstella Ranger Wanted

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    Reviewed

    Name of fighters(name and level): @Portgas D. Xatch lv 35 and @Cpt. lv 35 (durning the fight)
    Link to start of fight: opening
    Link to end of fight: ending
    Extra info: Bones are actually surprisingly unaffected by lightning! (google it lol)
     
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  9. rominmusa

    rominmusa

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  10. Larsi

    Larsi

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  11. rominmusa

    rominmusa

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    Oh. Sorry. I was waiting for that exp to add to weaponary
     
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  12. Fanboy sins

    Fanboy sins Wanted! Wanted

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  13. IceTimeXI

    IceTimeXI

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  14. Enryu

    Enryu

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    @Ziosa
    Personality-18/25

    Story Progression-19/25

    Combat Prowess-17/25


    Description-16/25

    Enjoyable-17/25

    Total Score: 87x4=348

    Pro: Good build up towards a fight and a nice ending, I liked the description of the attacks. Got hit when it made sense and no overestimation. Smart use of surrounding with your size.

    Con: I would have appreciated it if there was a speech/narration/thought coding
    348x19 =6612 Total Exp Awarded

    @Capt_NakedPanda
    Personality-20/25

    Story Progression-19/25

    Combat Prowess-16/25

    Description-17/25

    Enjoyable-17/25

    Total Score: 89x4=356


    Pro: I liked the split personality that was shown, as mentioned already there was a good build up towards the actual fight and there was a nice ending and the descriptions were good. The fight was fair and both of you got hit when it made sense.

    Con: I would have appreciated it if there was a speech/narration/thought coding from the start.
    356x18 =6408 Total Exp Awarded
     
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  15. Captain Abram

    Captain Abram

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  16. Dragomir

    Dragomir Wanted! Wanted

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  17. Ziosa

    Ziosa Rest in peace OJ Wanted Roger Big Mom Cracker Katakuri Smoothie

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    @Portgas D. Xatch
    Personality- 16/25
    Your characters personality was pretty good but could've been used more in some posts i think

    Story progression- 14/25
    An interesting place to fight but apart from that there wasnt much story

    Combat prowess- 18/25
    Pretty good overall, used your skeleton body in good ways

    Descriptions- 16/25
    Good overall, some of the posts could've been longer however

    Enjoyable- 18/25
    It was a pretty fun read

    No Rulebreaks

    82x4= 328
    328x10= 3,280 Total Exp awarded

    @Cpt.
    Personality- 17/25
    Your characters personality was pretty good, could have used your processor a bit more i think though

    Story progression- 14/25
    An interesting place to fight but apart from that there wasnt too much story

    Combat prowess- 18/25
    Pretty good overall, could have kept fighting though

    Descriptions- 17/25
    Good overall, but the smilies didn't add too much and weren't really needed

    Enjoyable- 18/25
    It was a pretty fun read

    No Rulebreaks

    84x4= 336
    336x10= 3,360 Total Exp awarded
     
  18. joby

    joby Big Mom

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  19. Larsi

    Larsi

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    @Tartan Owl
    Personality: 18
    Story Progression: 19
    Combat Prowess(Smart use of abilities, etc.): 18
    Descriptions: 19
    Enjoyable: 19
    Extra: I think your posts would look a bit better if you made paragraphs, not just a single line for each sentence.
    93x4=372
    372x6=2232+50%=3348 EXP

    @rominmusa
    Personality: 14
    Story Progression: 18
    Combat Prowess(Smart use of abilities, etc.): 17
    Descriptions: 16
    Enjoyable: 16
    81x4=324
    324x3=972+50%=1458 EXP

    @Handsome
    Personality: 17
    Story Progression: 18
    Combat Prowess(Smart use of abilities, etc.): 14
    Descriptions: 18
    Enjoyable: 19
    86x4=344
    344x2=688 EXP

    @IceTimeXI
    Personality: 15
    Story Progression: 17
    Combat Prowess(Smart use of abilities, etc.): 16
    Descriptions: 14
    Enjoyable: 12
    Rulebreak: "Autohit"/Controlling Alvida by throwing her when she's still conscious. -2
    Extra: Please format your posts so that it's easier to differentiate between speech and actions at least.
    72x4=288
    288x5=1440+50%=2160 EXP
     
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  20. Steampunk Sabo

    Steampunk Sabo

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