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  1. Fanboy sins

    Fanboy sins

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  2. Stealth Black Sanji

    Stealth Black Sanji

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    Dabit, Ziosa, CAPTAIN KHAN and 4 others like this.
  3. Larsi

    Larsi

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  4. Fanboy sins

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    Nero @luffy0206 VS Dabit @Dabitdavo review by @Fanboy sins

    Nero
    Personality:-20

    Story Progression:-18

    Combat Prowess:-14

    Descriptions:-17

    Enjoyable:-18

    Post Count:-9

    Rule Breaks: 0

    @luffy0206 Score: 5299



    DABIT
    Personality:-20

    Story Progression:-20

    Combat Prowess:-14

    Descriptions:-17

    Enjoyable:-18

    Post Count:-9

    Rule Breaks: 0

    @Dabitdavo Score:5471

    Personality: It is me again....Nothing new here.. Still best part of you guys

    Story Progression: early bandit fight scene was not really that thrilling. Avoid fighting with yourself please , or describe less those actions. Everything became way better when you two clashed,


    Combat Prowess:- Nero i know that Dabit has more options in those fights because of equipment. However try being more creative with battle. Also use ranked attacks too and add some rpg flavor .

    Descriptions: Choose what do you want to focus on wisely .

    Enjoyable: Story was enjoyable. Especially late part of it.

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  5. Roogy

    Roogy

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    @Sanji_
    Personality: 15
    Personality was very good given the constraints of being vampires.

    Story Progression: 13
    Story was okay.

    Combat Prowess: 14
    Combat was mostly engaging, but the lack of description for named attacks made it more difficult to follow in those instances.

    Descriptions: 15
    Description is strong in most places, but weak in some instances, such as named attacks.

    Enjoyable: 15
    Pretty good given the constraints.

    Post Count: 12
    EXP: 5433

    @Hakipotence
    Personality: 15
    Personality was very good given the constraints of being vampires.

    Story Progression: 13
    Story was okay.

    Combat Prowess: 14
    Combat was mostly engaging, but the lack of description for named attacks made it more difficult to follow in those instances.

    Descriptions: 15
    Description is strong in most places, but weak in some instances, such as named attacks.

    Enjoyable: 15
    Pretty good given the constraints.

    Post Count: 11
    EXP: 4980
     
  6. Stealth Black Sanji

    Stealth Black Sanji

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  7. Fire Tiger

    Fire Tiger

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  8. Fanboy sins

    Fanboy sins

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  9. Dabit

    Dabit

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  10. Cpt.

    Cpt.

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    Masquerade Round 1 @Fanboy sins vs @Handsome review by @Cpt.
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    George
    Personality: 13
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    Story Progression: 13
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    Combat Prowess: 18
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    Descriptions: 19
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    Enjoyable: 18
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    Post Count: 6
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    Rule Breaks: 0
    @Fanboy sins Score: 3196 (non-canon)

    Dagon
    Personality: 13
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    Story Progression: 13
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    Combat Prowess: 22
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    Descriptions: 19
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    Enjoyable: 18
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    Post Count: 5
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    Rule Breaks: 0
    @Handsome Score: 2849 (non-canon)

    I don't have too much to say. What you guys wrote was pretty damn awesome. Personality and story progression aren't integral here according to the rules so those scores are left at a flat average. The combat was really well written from both of you, but Handsome's was a bit more visually appealing to me. I would have liked you guys to both write a bit more since it was a good read :)
     
  11. Ziosa

    Ziosa

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    Name of fighters(name and level): Jade Level 58 ([@Ziosa) VS Thresher Level 10 (@SageDGod )
    Link to start of fight: https://orojackson.com/threads/revolutionary-officer-vs-member-jade-vs-nordstrom.57360/
    Link to end of fight: https://orojackson.com/threads/revolutionary-officer-vs-member-jade-vs-nordstrom.57360/#post-3701776
    Extra info: Hasnt been replied to since november
    --- Double Post Merged, Feb 19, 2019 at 5:50 PM, Original Post Date: Feb 19, 2019 at 1:07 AM ---
    Only reviewed the people still playing

    @Frayzah
    Personality: 16
    Story Progression: 15
    Combat Prowess: 0
    Descriptions: 17
    Enjoyable: 16
    Rule Breaks: 0
    Feedback: Giving you a bit of leeway for everything as this thread was a mess with all the people quitting half way through etc, but your earlier posts could have been longer though.
    Total EXP Awarded: 6,254

    @Capt_NakedPanda
    Personality: 17
    Story Progression: 15
    Combat Prowess: o
    Descriptions: 16
    Enjoyable: 16
    Rule Breaks: 0
    Feedback: personality was strong and you had enjoyable moments and interactions; the part where you fired a flare at lee stands out. story could have done with some work though, you just responded to people really.
    Total EXP Awarded: 1,876

    @Emperor Cross
    Personality: 15
    Story Progression: 15
    Combat Prowess: 0
    Descriptions: 16
    Enjoyable: 16
    Rule Breaks: 1
    Feedback: Didnt post stats during the thread so you get a rule break. also your layout of your posts could do with some work, hard to tell what is actions etc
    Total EXP Awarded: 1,598

    @Roogy
    Personality: 15
    Story Progression: 16
    Combat Prowess: 0
    Descriptions: 16
    Enjoyable: 15
    Rule Breaks: 0
    Feedback: short posts at first but due to amount of stuff you had to rp its not too bad, just next time add more stuff maybe
    Total EXP Awarded: 3,996

    @Ruffles
    Personality: 16
    Story Progression: 15
    Combat Prowess: 10
    Descriptions: 13
    Enjoyable: 15
    Rule Breaks: 0
    Feedback: feel you should have posted stats but didnt mark it as rule break due to being a nitpick tbh. combat and personality was fitting to the characters, could have done with a bit more description.
    Total EXP Awarded: 427
     
    Last edited: Feb 19, 2019 at 6:35 PM
  12. Char Aznable

    Char Aznable

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  13. Larsi

    Larsi

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